Review of “United 93”

“United 93” is a 2006 film portraying what happened on the fourth airplane hijacked on September 11, 2001, in which the passengers fought the hijackers after finding out that other hijacked planes had hit the World Trade Center. The film is done in a cinema-verite you-are-there documentary style, and thankfully there are no Hollywood archetypes – just ordinary people put in an extraordinary situation. Even the hijackers are portrayed as real people. Director Paul Greengrass did extensive research, including studying the government reports and conducting dozens of interviews with family members to get personal details right, and even real pilots and flight attendants are used to portray their roles in the film. Several families of the passengers of Flight 93 attended the world premiere of the film to show their support.

Greengrass does a masterful job making viewers feel like they are there. It is more than just the shaky cameras which many newspaper reviewers referred to – it is his sensitivity and portrayal of human emotions, and the choices he makes in what to show on the screen.

It is jarring at first to see that the beginning of the movie is from the standpoint of the hijackers, but this seems to be the only logical choice. After all, we, as viewers watching this after the events portrayed in the film, know what is coming, and it is only the hijackers who know what’s going to happen. One of the hijackers is sitting at a chair waiting at the gate waiting for the boarding call, and looks nervously to the man sitting next to him casually conducting everyday business affairs on his cellphone. A flight attendant asks one of the hijackers what he would like for breakfast… Seeing these men and women on the plane, including even the hijackers, portrayed as real people who we can somehow see ourselves being, makes the entire film almost unbearable and impossible to watch.

The scenes from the flight control centers are necessary to bring us back to that day, because most of us were as these people were – horrified observers. The film cuts back and forth between Flight 93 and the flight control centers, until the final part of the movie when we are on Flight 93 entirely.

What is gripping about this film is that it puts us in the minds of the people who died that day. Greengrass paid much attention to details, such as early on in the movie when a passenger looks behind her as she adjusts her seat backward to get more comfortable. The flight attendants put on their heels after having sat during the takeoff, to take food orders from the passengers. These mundanities of everyday travelling life set the psychological stage for the events to come.

In conventional Hollywood terms, the first half of the movie is “not very exciting,” and there is in reality a scant amount of violence when compared to commercial action films. But the film places you so completely and psychologically on the plane that day, that when the first horrors are committed — in the same real, gritty documentary style the rest of the film is made in — the violence is stomach-churning and horrifying.

The triumph of the movie is that, as we approach the final minutes and the passengers are aware this a suicide mission, we are still right there with them. One of the hijackers might trigger a bomb strapped to his waist at any second, and no one knows if they’ll live to see the next moment. We feel their terror and their struggle to build up their courage. The calls to loved ones – everyone with the same final words to say – are heartbreaking. In these final minutes, as the passengers face fate, the film becomes a universal experience.

The passengers’ terror, determination, and courage are now recreated through film, in possibly the best way it could have been done. Though the heroes on the plane are no longer with us, they live through us as the people we are: terrified, courageous human beings in our own right, who feel for them, admire them, and wish we can find the courage that they did someday. A respectful and heartfelt dedication to the passengers of Flight 93.

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“Grievance of a Little Bear”

This was during my Creative Writing class in my senior of high school. Our assignment: choose a classic fairy tale, but tell the story from the point of view of a different character in the story.

We were plopped into the computer lab and made to work on our stories. I drafted this during a single class period, and I look back at it and sigh… Why can’t I be that creative again? What do I need to do?

Grievance of a Little Bear

(December 13, 1994)

This innocence thing is overstated. The very fact that a young brat girl with a stupid name like Goldilocks can break and enter into an unassuming rural home and establish a permanent niche in human history as an innocent interloper clear from all judgment whatsoever through the medium of a fairy tale should be enough to evoke the moral furor of any decent individual. The President of the United States and other public authorities should effect lawful action to purge our population of this vile juvenile delinquent immediately. Any other form of action or display of ignorance shall be denounced as a crime. I recount my story:

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I just saw something truly frightening

Yes, ladies and gentlemen.

Believe it or not, these are descriptions of excerpts from actual essays from people, who are now certified lawyers for the California Bar, who scored the highest in the state on these particular essay questions. Not only that — the California Bar deemed these the highest-scoring essays in California, and posts these on their website as exemplars good reasoning.

I’m about to take this exam this week—entering my own personal hell for eight hours a day this Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday—and reading these made me realize: hey, these folks are no more intelligent than I am? Continue reading


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Movie Review: Planet of the Apes

I’m in Michigan and I’m realizing that most of my good stuff is back in Cali, and so here’s just a little thing to hold this blog over until I can get back. To compensate, I’ve included a second post below that is an oldie but goodie 🙂

July 30, 2007

My English teacher says I’m too opinionated. That I need to say more facts and not just opinions. I agree. There’s a lot of terrible things to say about the movie I saw.

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The Ballad of November Eleventh

What do you do when you’re obsessed about a sweet 17 year old pop star who has more talent and musicianship than anyone in perhaps about a generation?

Write an epic about him, of course!

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“One SimLife to Live” – Episode 1

I’ve always been a geek, and part of my problem has been a love for computer games. The Sims 3, for example, just released on June 2, 2009, is a work of modern art.

Create any person you want – a rock star, a dysfunctional family, a vegetarian neurotic – and let them loose in a colorful, slightly kooky simulated world and watch the shenanigans. You can control what jobs they take, their personalities, the friend and enemies they make, create complex, sordid lives, it’s all up to you. For some people their pleasure is much simpler – one favorite pastime is to put a “Sim” (as they are affectionately called) in a house, lead her into a closet, take away the door using the House Editor, and watch her die.

I, on the contrary, prefer creation over destruction. I was inspired by one creative blogger’s Sim game / anthropological study focusing on the digital lives of Alice and Kev, a homeless father and daughter who try to live out their lives in a cold and unforgiving Simtown. I figured: why not try to live out a simulated life in this wonderfully weird alterverse? Continue reading


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“This Is the Conversation We Never Had”

At UC-Berkeley in 1999, I had the good fortune of taking a creative writing class with Cherrie Moraga, a renowned Chicana poet. I was struggling to reawaken my muse after four years of professors assigning me expository essays had successfully crushed whatever creative impulses I still had.

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“Video Games”

This was my homework assignment for seventh grade: write a “persuasive essay” to convince the reader of a particular point of view. My teacher was a stickler for grammar and wrote over our papers with her red ballpoint pen. She would only give us assignments to build up the rudiments of expository writing. She was regimenting us for a future of standardized testing, she was.

I kept trying to be creative with my assignments, but she had none of it. “Check mark.” “Check mark.” That was all I got back. No smiley faces that Mr. Fleming, my awesome sixth-grade English teacher, gave me. I wanted to excel, I wanted to stand out! I didn’t want to just be competent.

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Hello world!

Wow, this is my first post and it’s supposed to be historic and stuff. But I gotta run to class and study for the California Bar! Well, it’s called “Hello world!” So yeah, that. Okay, I’m done. (For now.)


Well, actually:

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